I like him. He looks creepy, and 'ass kick' powerful.
It's a very pretty picture.
If you really look like that...you're cute. There is one thing that I keep trying to figure out. There is something funky about the proportions on this. Alice is technically the right height, but her torso doesn't seem quite long enough in relationship to her legs. If this was done in photoshop, I'd be tempted to scale everything below her waist down at least 10%, and perhaps lengthen the skirt a smidge. Don't get me wrong, you've got mad talent, and figure drawing is tougher than people think it is. I still think it's a very pretty picture. :]
That is all.
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